이번 주엔 7학년 한 학생이 쓴 4점을 받은 CST 라이팅 설득문(persuasive writing)을 싣습니다. 주제는 ‘Imagine that you have decided to start an after-school activity club and want to recruit new members. Think about the club you would like to start at your school. Then write a letter to persuade students your age to join the club. Be sure to include specific reasons and details that would make students want to join your club.’입니다.

Attention All Students!
Volleyball season is right around the corner and how many of you plan on trying out? Well, if you need a little extra help or just want to refresh your memory, sign up for Volleyball Club! Volleyball Club is on Mondays and Wednesdays from 3:00-5:00 p.m. free of charge. Learn all the basic skills and even a few tricky tips! After the first three weeks of this club, we will be holding a tournement where you can win all types of prizes. Joining Volleyball Club will help you become a better player and teach you better sportsmanship.
Most kids have very little knowledge of volleyball, especially boys since they are not allowed to try out for school teams. However, over this two month period, you can learn all the fundamentals of the game. For serving we will teach you correct foot placement, how to hit the ball, and even tricks like how to get the ball to go in a certain area on the court. For spiking we will do the same things but also teach you how to put power on the ball without hitting it out of bounds. Setting will be one of the most complicated thig we will teach you since it takes time to do correctly. Once you have mastered the basics, you can move to the more challenging objects of volleyball such as faking out the other team. When you are done with volleyball camp, you’ll be ready for anything on the court.
We do realize that cost is a big factor for some students and their families. For this reason, participating in the club is free. However, at the end of the club you will be able to purchase sweaters with your name on it if you desire. If you would like one but feel you cannot afford it, please speak with me in private and we can work something out.
Some students think that all sports are about winning. This is obviously not true. Volleyball Club is a great opportunity for students to build a better attitude towards sports and get the help they need to develop great sportsmanship whether they win or lose. Good sports-manship makes everyone a winner!
If you want to learn how to play volleyball, build a better character, or have something fun to do after school, be in the gym after school on Monday for your first Volleyball Club meeting. In this meeting we will go over the rules, give everyone their uniforms, and discuss where everyone sees themselves playing. On Wednesday we will pick up a ball and be ready to start! If you do not attend the meeting on Monday, you will be unable to attend Volleyball Club for the remainder of the year. So don’t forget be in the gym Monday. Welcome boys and girls.
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